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A Clock Ticking: An Open Pen Critique

Annalia Fiore, who blogs about appreciating the joy of writing, has sent in another fascinating short story for us to critique! And Annalia still wants us to "rip to shreds" and "demolish" her writing. Brave, brave soul! Annalia mentioned nothing as far as specific types of critique, so go ahead and comment on everything from… Continue reading A Clock Ticking: An Open Pen Critique

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The Morning After She Came: An Open Pen Critique

Yes, it is a Monday, and I am posting an Open Pen Critique rather than a Writing Tip. The reason is simple-- I have a couple of scholarships and a summer course to finish this week (in addition to edits on my WIP and working full time) before I backpack this weekend. Yikes! So, today--… Continue reading The Morning After She Came: An Open Pen Critique

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The Dragon in the Mini: An Open Pen Critique

Currently, this is the only submission in the Open Pen queue, so if you were planning on submitting a piece for critique, now would be a great time to do it! This week for Open Pen we have a fantasy short story from Chelsea who blogs over at An Ordinary Pen. This story is a… Continue reading The Dragon in the Mini: An Open Pen Critique